Monday, April 27, 2009

Finale

Ok, so I finally managed to type up my part of the script; so here it is. I'm still rather dissatisfied with the ending, but have yet to come up with one that's better. Without further ado, here it is:

INT. LIVINGROOM – DAY

Kevin slams the door shut. Relieved to finally be rid of his guests, he uses his sleeve to wipe the sweat form his brow. He lets out a sigh.

PULL OUT to see Kevin leaning against the door; he’s finally alone. He moseys back to the coffee table with the full ashtrays and empty beer cans.
CLOSE UP KEVIN
Kevin valiantly searches for a can with a last drop of booze. He lets out a groan as he sits down on the floor by the coffee table.
LONG SHOT LIVING ROOM
Suddenly a knock echoes form the door. Kevin’s head bows as yet another visitor is unwittingly put in danger. The door swings wide open, light bursts into the room, momentarily blinding Kevin. He shields his eyes as a figure, his ex-girlfriend AMY, slowly walks toward him.
MEDIUM SHOT AMY
AMY (insert description here) walks toward Kevin with arms stretched out. Her purse dangles awkwardly on her shoulder. She’s pretty well dolled up for visiting her ex.
OVER THE SHOULDER AMY
Kevin touches his bomb briefly, he has a dumbfounded look on his face. Trying to play it cool, Kevin puts a burnt out cigarette to his mouth. Amy’s shadow hits Kevin.
PUSH TO KEVIN
He rubs his bloodshot eyes, blinks a few times. His eyes go wide, the burnt-out cigarette falls from his mouth. He lets out a big smile.
MEDIUM SHOT KEVIN
Kevin dusts himself off as he gets up. He sidesteps the debris around his seat.
WIDE SHOT KEVIN AND AMY
The Bomb on Kevin’s chest beeps violently; the counter has reached zero. Kevin jumps back, expecting it to all be over.
OVER THE SHOULDER KEVIN
Amy shoots him a puzzled look.
MEDIUM SHOT KEVIN
He wipes the beads of sweat off his brow for the second time, gives reassuring motions toward Amy. Kevin Shrugs his shoulders, he walks toward Amy. He steps into the light pouring in from the door.
POV AMY
Amy glances around the room, sees how trashed it is, takes a step back.
MS KEVIN AND AMY
Kevin moves back toward Amy. The two pause, stare at each other for a moment before they finally embrace.
CU KEVIN’S FACE
Kevin smiles contentedly toward the camera.
A wicked cool explosion cuts their reunion short…

FADE OUT

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